Friday 6 May 2011

Evaluation

Here are my finnished radio drama, newspaper advert and double feature page.




1. In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

I have used many different radio dramas as research into producing my own radio drama.  After listening to existing radio dramas such as War of the Worlds, I felt that radio was out dated and needed development. I felt that the drama was not as dramatic and gripping as it could possibly be. To help me get more ideas for my product I asked 2 people, both aged 18 to listen to radio dramas such as "War of the Worlds" and "Hitchhickers Guide to the Galaxy". Both listeners said that they found the dramas "boring" and hard to follow as they simply weren't enough excitement. Therefore, I decided to challenge existing conventions of radio drama when producing my own work. I also researched into Todrovs narrative theory, but also had to take into consideration the given time length of my radio drama which was only 5 minutes. I decided I would take elements of Propps narrative theory and begin the story with a settled equilibrium. I wanted to keep the audience interested so the distruption of the equilibrium happens very fast within the story. Although Propps theory of equilibrium states that it is restored towards the end of the story, I have decided to challenge this and went with a cliff hanger ending to enable the audience to come to their own conclusions of what has happened. Within the drama I have applied the representation theorist Laura Mulvey. Laura Mulveys theory on the male gaze stated that in media platforms such as films, females are simply there to be "enjoyed" by males. Meaning that women are simply there to be looked at. Although I don't entirely agree with this theory, I think it will help towards the success of the radio drama. This is because all 3 characters are females and all are attractive. According to this theory, it will attract a male audience. The theory also states that women are "helpless" and need to be helped by a male figure. This could definitely be applied to my radio drama as all three character experience problems in the story and are very helpless when they face their life or death situation. All three characters fit well into typical stereo types. Stephanie being, the rude, bitchy young women. Elizabeth being the stereotypical geek who is well spoken. Katie represents the sterotypical "bimbo", pretty face but not very intelligent.

Like War of the Worlds, our radio drama includes radio announcements to help tell the story. I liked this aspect so I decided to include it in my own work, and as War of the Worlds in a well known radio drama, I thought this would work well as it has done before. I think our radio drama challenges some conventions of radio drama as the genre of the radio drama is horror. I have not come across many, if not any radio dramas with the genre of horror. I wanted our audience to be shocked when the story unfolded. Not many radio dramas use cliff hangers to the extent which we did. I thought that this worked well as it will encourage listeners to tune in again to find out what has happened. Our radio drama has also challenged conventions of narrative structure as we have left it with an open ending and this goes against Todrovs theory of equilibrium in narrative.

Although our radio drama has challenged many conventions, it has also followed and utilised existing ones. Many dramas use music within the dramas to create atmosphere and effects. Me and my group questioned this as we felt music may make the drama become unrealistic to the audience. But after finding the right music to use in our drama we felt that it worked extremely well and created amazing effects when listening to the final product. After analysing the existing radio drama called "Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy" I noticed that certain characters spoke in certain ways to reveal aspects of their personality or levels of authority. For example if an audience hears a women speak quietly and unclear, it suggests that the character is shy and unconfident. Whereas, If the audience hears a woman speak loud and clearly, this could suggest the character could be bossy and confident. I have applied this convention to my own radio drama. For example, the character of Stephanie is very bitchy and likes to intimidate other people. I have shown this in the radio drama through the way in which she speaks. The character speaks very loudly and clear. She also uses sarcastic tones within her voice when speaking to the character of Elizabeth. This shows her personality and her feelings towards other characters. The character of Elizabeth speaks clear standard english, but doesn't speak as loud as Stephanie. It shows that she is confident and intelligent. Katies personality is not as strong and conflicting as the other two characters, and this is shown through the way she speaks, which is quite laid back and finds it difficult to take sides when it comes to Elizabeth and her sister Stephanie.

Radio is sometimes described as very outdated. As a group we wanted to produce something contemporary and exciting. This meant breaking and developing many conventions in order to create something new for the market.
Throughout most media products, such as films and radio drama gender is stereotypically represented. Girls are often represented as weak amd not seen as dominant characters. Me and my group challenged this as we used only 3 female characters and most were represented as having strong personalities.


2. How effective is the combination of your main product and ancillary texts

I think that these three products work extremely well together. From the start I knew that I didn't want my poster or feature page to give away too much of the story itself, as both the poster and feature are being released before the radio drama. Visually, I think that the poster and double feature page compliment each other. I think this because from looking at both products, the colours match aswell as the images. I set out for each product to reveal a little of the content of the radio drama to the audience each time one was released. The poster is the first product to be released (July 14th). The image on the poster gives the audience some idea as to what the story is about, but not enough evidence to cause a viewer to come to a conclusion. The poster suggests many different routes for the storyand I intended for the audience to question what will happen. No characters are featured within this poster, I decided to do this as it will intrigue the audience and ensure that they will keep a look out for new products about the radio drama. The colours I have used within my poster are bright and eye catching which is sure to attract my target audience of young people.
In my double feature page I based my feature mainly on the actors and their personal lives, mentioning little when promoting the radio drama itself. I decided to this because I felt that it would give the readers a chance to relate the the actors themselves. This would then encourage them to listen to the radio drama when it is released.
To help me measure the effectiveness of the products I have created, I have conducted a meeting for my class members and tutors to give me their opinions and audience feedback. The entire class said that it was obvious the poster and feature page were linked, and this was due to the colour scheme and one image which was placed in both. All three products are released within a 3 week window gap. I have chosen to do this as I believe it has more chance of interesting the audience, which will result in maximum popularity.
I have used different techniques in order to attract my audience. Techniques such as bright colours, and young people within images. This will attract young people and my products will reach my target audience. I asked 30 people aged 17, 18 and 19 if they would tune in to listen to my radio drama on the release date. Each person said that they would listen to this drama as they were eager to find out what the content of the drama is. They said that the poster really caught their eye and made them question what it was about. They also said that the feature page enabled them to get to know the actors who played the characters. Also, as the characters were young, they could relate very well with them.

3. What have you learnt from your audience feedback?
When I had finnished all of the products, I conducted a meeting with my class members and personal tutors. I presented them with the order in which I would plan to release each product.
Firstly, I presented them with my poster (which I plan to release on the 14th of July 2011) Many people said they liked the colour scheme which was used and thought that the red looked like blood which symbolised death. They said the poster gave them an idea that it was horror due to the picture of the car but felt that it didnt give away too much. 
Secondly, I presented them with the double page feature (which I plan to release on the 31st of July) Many people said that they liked my unusual approach in the feature as not many Radio Times feature pages would have included the insight into the characters personal lives. Many people my age said that they liked this as they felt it was laid back and made radio dramas more approachable than before.
Finally I presented them with the final recording of my radio drama. (which I plan to be aired on the 7th August)
The radio drama itself was very well recieved as most people said they felt they were constantly on edge throughout the drama

Audience feedback has helped me a lot over the past few weeks. Although many people liked my first designs, they felt that there was much room for improvement. Without my audience feedback I don't feel that my over all products would have been succesful as they could have been.
Overall the radio drama was very well recieved by the group of people I presented it to. Although there was some dislikes about the drama. Some people felt that too much happened at once, but considering that we were given a time limit of 5 minutes, I feel that the radio drama would have resulted in being very boring to listen to if we did not put so much into it.


4. How did you use media technologies in the construction and research, planning and evaluation stages?

Throughout all the production stages of my radio drama, I have used a wide variety of media technologies.
Using the website http://www.blogger.com/ has helped me organize my research with a well organised structure. I wanted my blog to contain multimedia. I included images, texts, videos and links in order to display my work and progress and best as I can. Using this blog really helped me with my time keeping skills. I felt that this improved over time.
I have used the internet through out this process, especially in the research stages. I used platforms such as BBC I Player, which provided me with a variety of existing radio dramas and reviews. It also gave me insight in to Radio stations which helped me decide which station I would choose to air my radio drama.

Photography very much helped with the planning of my poster. I ended up with a number of different types of shots for my poster. I tried and tested many different images, then felt the one that I had choosen was not working as well as it possibly could so therefore, I changed the image.
Before starting this project, I had very limited knowledge with editing programmes such as Soundtrack Pro and Photoshop. I found that the more I tried and tested, playing around with images and sound I found myself gaining more skills in the programmes which I needed to. I learnt how to give images certain effects to give impressions of "mystery" or "violence". I also learnt how to add sound effects to create an impact on the audience.
I also used programmes such as Itunes to burn my first draft onto cd which I then used to recieve audience feedback.
Programmes such as Photoshop, InDesign, Soundtrack Pro and final cut have helped me develop my work. All these programmes are used by proffessionals which allows me to create my very own proffessional looking products.
Soundtrack pro has enabled me to bring the raw recording together, remove sections, and add sound effects. Without this programme I would have not been able to produce such high quality work.
Final cut has enabled me to create videos and demonstrate my work and findings, without this it would have been very difficult to show my development in my work.
InDesign has enabled me to produce proffessional looking print work to a very high standard. Due to this programme it has allowed me to create eye catching headlines and text using a number of different text effects. I have used collumns in my feature after looking at existing articles. I wanted my work to look as proffessional as possible so I followed existing conventions within features.
Technology has also helped in the evaluation of my work. I have used social networking sites such as Facebook to show people my age my work in order to get the best results for my evaluation.

Final Changes - Double Feature Page

I showed my double feature page to many people within my target audience and asked them what they thought of it as an overall product and how I could improve it.
Almost all members of the audience said that it wasn't clear as to what the purpose of the images were and how they relate to the article. Many said that the product could benefit from captioning on the pictures used as it will help the article relate to the images and become more clearer.
The audience thought that the Radio Times logo used at the bottom right corner was too large and detracts attention from the article itself.
Also, many said that the headline was very basic and not eye catching enough as it could be.



What I Improved and How


First of all I changed the logo on my feature page. I decided to use this image which I edited in photoshop earlier.


I then made the Radio Times logo in the bottom corners smaller. Using Indesign I created a red background for my Headline to be placed over as I thought it made the overall image look neater. I used picture effects such as the image in the circle to make the article more interesting and catch my audiences eye.


Here is my final double feature page. The last changes I made were to the image. Using the text box tool I added captions to help explain the images to the audience, making it easier for them to engage with the article 


Final Changes - The Radio Drama

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tv4lDRTTCKo


Here is our radio drama. Although many people enjoyed the over all product. Many felt that the middle section "dragged on" and there was too many references to the word "car." They said that tis effects the narrative in a negative way as audiences began to get bored. To improve this I would have to use Soundtrack Pro, and remove certain sections in order for it to flow better.
Some also said that the levels of amplitude needed adjusting at some points in the drama as some parts were very loud, whereas some were very quiet.
The listeners also said that it wasn't clear enough that it was a Sat Nav, or a radio in some sections. And because of this, the radio drama would not be as successful as it could be. I could change this by Distorting the voice in Soundtrack Pro.




What I Improved and How
To make the radio and sat nav sound more realistic, I went into Soundtrack Pro and used the Bitcrusher tool. I went into presets and selected AM Radio. This gived the desired effect as it made it sound like voices were coming from real radios and sat navs, making the entire drama more realistic.



In our audience feedback, a lot of people commented on the middle section of the drama and said it went on for too long and there were too many references to the word car. So, I used the razor tool in Soundtrack Pro and cut parts out to make the drama flow.

Many people also commented on the volume levels of parts of our drama. Some were very loud whereas some were quiet. To fix this i adjusted the amplitude in Soundtrack Pro.



here is the final radio drama after the final editing process................



Tuesday 3 May 2011

Final Changes - Newspaper Advert

I asked people within my target audience what they thought of my poster which I designed for my radio drama, and would also be published in the radio times and popular news papers.
Many people thought that the use of two images was very confusing and that the bottom image was misleading in relation the content of the drama. Most people thought that there was way too much going on in the poster and that I should use only one image.  A lot of people liked the image of the car with the look of blood. Therefore, I have decided to use that as my single image.
Also, in my feedback, many people thought that the BBC Radio 4 logo looked basic and unprofessional and thought  that it would improve the over all poster if the logo was transparent.
Some people commented on the text used within the poster and said that some parts were difficult to read (those in white).

This audience feedback has helped me in many ways as it will enable me to reach my target audience even more and as a media institution give the audience what they want from certain products.


What and How I Improved the advert

First of all, using InDesign I removed the image of the characters as it didn't relate to the content of the drama. Instead I used this one single image for a eye catching effect. Using the tool box, I then created a black filled box at the top of the page.


I then placed this image to replace the existing logo with the white background. Many people (including myself) thought that the one used before didn't look very professional as it stood out, having a negative effect on the over all poster. I created this image by first of all searching the bbc radio 7 logo in Google.co.uk. I then opened Photoshop and selected the wand tool. I selected the white part of the logo (the background) and then made it transparent. Afterwards I placed it into Indesign and decided on the location of the logo. I felt that the logo should be in the bottom right hand corner as it is noticable but not distracting attention from other elements of the poster.


I wanted to include a bloog drip effect on my poster as I think this will interest the audience and make them think what the content of the radio drama is. First of all I searched this on Google.co.uk. I needed the background of this image to be black. So, I opened up Photoshop and selected the white background of the image using the wand tool. I selected the layer tab, new fill layer and Solid colour (black.)





This is the edited image which I then placed into Indesign.



I removed writing which was hard to see and replaced it with a clearer and shorter sentence as the audience felt there was too much going on in the previous design. I kept the reviews and 5 stars as I have seen other posters use this convention and it looks professional. Although, I did change the font from bold to regular.

Sunday 17 April 2011

Posters

Here are the other two posters created by my group



We have decided to use the first image to advertise our radio drama in the Radio Times. We have decided to use this as we think it portrays the drama itself very well. It also looks professional, and features the 3 characters

The Radio drama

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tv4lDRTTCKo

The Placement Dates

I have arranged the placement of my adverts in a particular order to entise the audience

The Poster

I have decided that the poster will be featured in the Radio Times on 14th July 2011. I also want my poster to appear in places where my target audience would be such as town centres, schools, university etc. This will give my poster maximum chance of being seen by my target audience. Also, I have choosen this date because as it is summer time, it means students will not be in school, college or university so they will have more free time on their hands to read into magazines such as the Radio Times.

Double Page Feature



My feature page will be places in The Radio Times on July 31st 2011. This is a week after the poster would have been placed, I have choosen such a short window gap for the next release due to keeping my target audience interested.

The Radio Drama

After all the advertisements have been placed, the radio drama itself will be released on the 7th August. This is also a week after the last advertisement placement. I have decided to do this simply to keep the target audience interested and to ensure the radio drama recieves as much attention as it possibly can

Final Poster - Newspaper advert


Final Version - Magazine Feature

Ancillary Task 2 - Designing My Feature Page

After researching into many different feature pages, I have decided that I want to include a "behind the scenes" section. This section is going to focus on the actors themselves, discussing the production of the up coming release, their experiences and a peek into their own lives. Again, I have to consider my target audience, which is young people aged 18 to 25. Therefore, I want to include "fun" images of the actors to keep the readers interested.
Here are a few ideas for images that I could possibly use to portray the young actors.


Firstly I took these photos, cropped them and "Auto Coloured" them in Photoshop.

After looking at existing features in the Radio Times, I designed a layout, followed it and my own feature page began to look like this.
I felt that a strong bold colour was needed in order to attract the audience, and decided that i neeeded more red within the feature. Therefore, I decided to use the other version of the car image.

After altering the colours on the page and including the edited images I think that this feature page works very well.

Wednesday 30 March 2011

Change of plan

I have now decided to use BBC Radio 7 as the broadcaster for my radio drama. I have decided this because this station is commonly used for entertainment and radio dramas. It also features extended dramas from the Radio 4 station. This means that the station is widely listened to and I want to give my radio drama maximum chance of being listened to by audiences.

I am now aware that BBC radio 7 has been re branded and named BBC Radio 4 extra.

Tuesday 29 March 2011

Ancillary Task 2 - Double Feature Page

I have decided that i would like my feature page within a copy of The Radio Times. I have choosen this because it is a very popular print which can be aimed at a range of different ages, including my target market. I believe that my radio drama will have more chance of success if it is featured in this print as more people will view it.


I have searched Radio Times feature pages on google and found these two examples above. I have noticed that both feature pages use bright colours in order to attract the audience and striking photos. Both examples also use a combination of text and images in many different ways to ensure that the features are visually pleasing. When designing my feature page I would like to include the same conventions as The Radio Times uses within their feature pages.

This image above is a feature article which was published in The Radio Times. It is an article which is promoting a radio drama. As you can see, this feature has included a very large image of the characters within the radio drama. The three characters are looking directly into the camera. This promotes the drama as it enables the audience to identify with the characters and helps them visualize the story when they get round to listening to the radio drama itself. The feature uses a variety of text and images. As I want my double feature page to appeal to young people such as myself, I will use limited text and use a wide variety of different images to make it visually pleasing.


This image above is a double page feature which was in The Radio Times. I really like this feature as it is attrative and really catches my attention. As I am a young person, and I like this feature, I think that this idea will appeal very well to other people my age (my target audience). I have noticed that this feature has included a "behind the scenes" section. This allows the audience to see beyond the production of the drama and see into the peoples lives who play the characters. I think that this will work extremely well, especially if the actors are well known and famous.

Looking at this image has helped me come up with some basic ideas for my own double page feature spread. Here is my first idea for my double page feature spread. I designed this lay out on te computer and this is how I plan the feature to look.




I need to take into consideration the timing of release for my feature page spread. I have decided that I would like this feature to be published one week before the radio drama is first aired. I think that this is a suitable time because the readers of this article will still be interested and eager to listen to the drama after reading the article

Thursday 24 March 2011

Ancillary Task - Designing my poster

After looking at other examples such as film posters I have come up with my first idea.

I want to use this image within the poster accompanied by another including the three characters in the drama. I have choosen this image of an empty car to symbolise isolation. I want the viewers of this poster to question why the car has an importance within the drama and why it is empty with its doors open.



I wanted the picture to be more focussed on the car itself rather than the surroundings so I cropped the image. I then increased the contrast and decreased the brightness to create a bigger impact on the overal image.




I felt that the editing I had done wasn't enough to give impression that I wanted, so I decided to manipulate the image even more. I clicked on the black and white tab in adjustments and selected a preset called Maximum White. This changed the the black and white colours which give a sense of mystery and darkness which relates the the radio drama itself





I also used this image below of the three characters in the radio drama. I have choosen this to help the audience identify with the characters and the drama and as this poster is being released 4 weeks before airing it will encourage young people to listen to the drama.



I cropped the image and adjusted the brightness and contrast




I wanted this image to match the one with the car so I also changed the image to black and white


Saturday 19 March 2011

Editing

Today I have been introduced to the editing aspects of Soundtrack Pro, and here is a few basic things that I have learnt today and have used within my radio drama


Adding Sound Effects
  • Soundrack Pro has a wide variety of free sound effects so there is no need to worry about copyright.


Here is where you can access a range of different sound effects in soundtrack pro. In the section I was editing, I need it to give the impression that it was raining. I clicked the ambience tab and found rain effects. When I found the desired clip, I clicked and dragged it into a new track.


In some parts of our radio drama there were very loud sections which needed adjusting. So, using Soundtrack Pro I created a sound envelope and adjusted the volume. I listened back to what I had edited and the loud parts now fitted in with the rest of the drama. 

Here is a video of me editing the end section of our script...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HGTwDuU-YTQ


Here is an example of raw recording which has not being edited at all,
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nUP05dkDrlc


There was no doubt that the raw recording needing editing doing to make the drama successful, so here is an example of the same clip but with added sound effects, recording and cut down in order for it to make sence.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=788yAhLOMn8


Here is a video of a section which I edited, with probably the most sound effects used
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YExgpqpoVfI


Here is also another example of how editing has helped the drama become more exciting and more realistic
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YExgpqpoVfI
In particular I really like how the door sound effects were used, and the sound of the footsteps, I think it helps the audience visualise the story.

Friday 11 March 2011

Ancillary task - Newspaper Advert

Forms and Conventions

For the next part of my coursework is to create a poster to promote my radio drama for publication in a national newspaper.


This image is a cd cover advertising the radio drama called "The Archers".
When looking at this image I can notice many different forms and conventions
in this case I have noticed that the poster has
  • a bold title across the image
  • a background to represent the radio drama as a whole
  • characters within the radio drama
on this cd cover there are many things that help the audience identify with the drama. For example, the use of characters in the image will help the audience relate to and visualise to the story. As for this advertisement, I don't think it suits my target audience. I think that this example is aimed at older people such as men and women aged 40 and over, which suits "The Archers" target market.





By looking at this radio advertisement above, I think that this is aimed at men and women aged between 25 and 40. I think this because they have used characters of both genders (male and female) and aged between 25 and 35. This means that their target market will be able to relate to the characters in the drama and seeing them in this advertisement before listening to the drama, may help them visualise the story and happenings when they do come round to listen to the final product. This advertisement looks quite sophisticated and doesn't give away too much about the over all story. It leaves the audience free to make assumptions of the story itself.

 



I also decided to look at posters for films. Film posters are usually very successful with advertising their products so I want to research into this to make my drama advertising equally as successful.

This poster for the film called "In The Name of the Son" Has used minimal text and allowed the images to reveal or in some cases not reveal the story. In this poster I have also noticed that two image have been used. The image a the top could be suggesting the starting point of the film and the closeness of the two charactes shown. The second image underneath could be revealing how the narrative and story unfolds. The Scratch/broken glass effect accross the image could be symbolising the breaking down of a friendship that occurs in the story.
After looking at this example I have come up with some basic ideas of how I want poster to look.  Here is a draft I dont earlier on the computer of how I plan to construct my poster.



I have decided to use two images within my poster. One image, which will be at the top of the poster is going to be a picture of an empty car with both doors wide open. I have chosen to do this as I want the viewers of this poster to question why the car is empty and why the doors have been left open. Hopefully this will encourage the viewers to listen to the radio drama when it is released. As for editing this picture, I want the image to create a sense of mystery so I will play around with the colours to get the desired effect. I also want to try and create a "claw" effect on the car. For this I will find a claw effect image on the internet and photoshop it into the image.

For the second image, which will be placed at the bottom half of the poster. This image will include all 3 characters to help the audience identify and relate to the characters. I also want this image to give the impression of mystery so i will edit this picture aswell to give it the desired effect.

To make my poster look professional so a Radio 4 logo will be placed in the corner. I also want to include 5 star reviews from newspapers such as The Sun and The Daily Mail. This will also encourage viewers of the poster to listen to the finnished product.






Friday 28 January 2011

Radio Drama Synopsis


Elizabeth and Katie are two 19 year olds who are both studying at Manchester University. When Katie’s bitchy sister Stephanie comes to take the girls home back to Oxford, their trip takes an unexpected turn for the worst. Unusual things begin to happen, starting with the closure of two largely populated motorways. The three girls decide to change the route on the sat nav, which provides them with an alternative journey. The girls are oblivious to where they are when more strange things begin to happen. The radio news announcement warns them to stay inside and then they suddenly they hit something. When the girls get out to investigate there is nothing in sight but the large, monstrous claw mark on the bonnet of the car. The car door suddenly shuts unexpectedly, along with the headlights, locking the keys away in the car, and the girls are left in darkness, but are they alone?

Thursday 27 January 2011

Production Log - 14th January

After showing other class members the first draft for our script, they gave us some feedback. although our class mates enjoyed the radio drama, many members of the group felt that we needed an ending with much more of an impact. The class suggested that we include a suggestion of death or murder, allowing the audience to come to the conclusion of what has happened. Also, many members of the group felt that there was too much use of bad language. we then had to consider who our radio drama was targeted at, and realised that if we wanted to target our product at a wide range of people, we would have to remove the swearing.
To make the radio drama more interesting we decided to include conventions from other tv programmes and films such as Dead Set