Production Log - 14th January

After showing other class members the first draft for our script, they gave us some feedback. although our class mates enjoyed the radio drama, many members of the group felt that we needed an ending with much more of an impact. The class suggested that we include a suggestion of death or murder, allowing the audience to come to the conclusion of what has happened. Also, many members of the group felt that there was too much use of bad language. we then had to consider who our radio drama was targeted at, and realised that if we wanted to target our product at a wide range of people, we would have to remove the swearing.
To make the radio drama more interesting we decided to include conventions from other tv programmes and films such as Dead Set